If......

If......

A Poem by AprilRN1210
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just thinking out loud

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If I were a Star


glittering, animated fun


incandescent illumination


second only to the sun.


 


If I were a  Flower


fleshy petals dripping confection


infatuation’s aphrodisiac


dulcet, aromatic affection.


 


If I were an  Angel


alluring mankind


bewitching enticement


both sinful and divine.


 


If I were a Dream


tantalizing, magnetic illusion


provocative stimulation


delicious diverting delusion.


 


 


If I were a Thought


refreshing delight


entertain, captivate


stimulate and excite.


© 2015 AprilRN1210


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Star Flower Angel Dream Thought. These bold headliner words are by themselves a poem, and you poeticize around each one of those words in a creative, and rhythmic way. I like when you liken the dream to/ Magnetic illusion. very cool way to describe the energy we build upon and harness in our deepest sleep.


Diego

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

thank you for an equally detailed, insightful review.. I am tickled you enjoyed this scribble.. I wr.. read more



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Good but it'd be really nice if you had a concluding sentence that wrapped up all these thoughts together

Posted 9 Years Ago


AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

I appreciate you opinion, but this was a lingering thought that just trailed through my mind and som.. read more
If I were an Angel
alluring mankind
bewitching enticement
both sinful and divine.

That is my kind of angel… there is no doubt you are all those things.


Posted 9 Years Ago


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AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

I was agreeing with you sir!..... I think I am a little more spice than sugar though... Some like it.. read more
The Rock And Roll Cowboy(REBEL WITH A CAUSE)

9 Years Ago

Oh I know you were agreeing, I was just confirming… yes spicy is good.
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

ok, just checking! :)
Your poetry is fascinating. It really does stimulate, excite and provoke thoughts. This was a gem of a writing with creativity...:)................

Posted 9 Years Ago


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AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Sami! That is what I aim to do sir! Yours is always so deep, meaningful, and thou.. read more
Sami Khalil

9 Years Ago

Much obliged. You are welcome...:).........................
Agree with Ron.
You're ALL THAT...
...and then some. :)

Pleasure to read this, flowed so nice. Like a dream.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

You are too kind girl, thank you so much! making me blush now:)

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ron
Yes you are all of the what if's and more.
Love the poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your sweet words, Ron:)
ron

9 Years Ago

You are most welcome sweet April :)
Amazing use of the word "If". The possibilities we could be if we had the opportunity. Nice flow of thoughts in the poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words;)
I love this creative little gem!

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Julie:)
i really enjoy the wording in this, the alliteration...i believe this piece can stand on its own with the wording....not a real fan of all the different colors and such..

but really like the theme...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Jacob. I was just playing around with it to see what I think.. Honestly, I think I agree .. read more
A lot of thought and care went into the creation of this introspective piece.

Nicely done. I often think
If I were a rich man......

But I have poetry and friends. ... and though I am not wealthy
I am rich.

Trace

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Thank you, Trace:)

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