If......

If......

A Poem by AprilRN1210
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just thinking out loud

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If I were a Star


glittering, animated fun


incandescent illumination


second only to the sun.


 


If I were a  Flower


fleshy petals dripping confection


infatuation’s aphrodisiac


dulcet, aromatic affection.


 


If I were an  Angel


alluring mankind


bewitching enticement


both sinful and divine.


 


If I were a Dream


tantalizing, magnetic illusion


provocative stimulation


delicious diverting delusion.


 


 


If I were a Thought


refreshing delight


entertain, captivate


stimulate and excite.


© 2015 AprilRN1210


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Star Flower Angel Dream Thought. These bold headliner words are by themselves a poem, and you poeticize around each one of those words in a creative, and rhythmic way. I like when you liken the dream to/ Magnetic illusion. very cool way to describe the energy we build upon and harness in our deepest sleep.


Diego

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

thank you for an equally detailed, insightful review.. I am tickled you enjoyed this scribble.. I wr.. read more



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Whoa....
This is a way good poem.
Significantly brilliant, erotic, enjoyable, and captivating.
Marks at some of the best. Highly passable as O-style poetry.
Thank you for making this world a better, better place, to live in.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

wow... not sure what O-style poetry is, but will say thank you anyways:)
I am glad you enjoyed.. read more
Derek29

9 Years Ago

Sure. It's a pretty good poem.
Outstanding! Straight to the point without wasted words and very sophisticated. Loved it~

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much. I am tickled you enjoyed my scribbles.. I appreciate the read and review:)
This was enchanting April, such nice thoughts. It is fun to sit and ponder things like this, but to have the ability to write them out so nicely...well that is all you my friend.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Shhhh, don't tell, but was actually daydreaming at work and scribbled this down.. I agree---it is fu.. read more
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MAC
and if i were a poet, i would very much wish to be able to write this.....perfect!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

That is very kind of you. I am so glad you enjoyed my daydream.. thank you.. I appreciate it.. nice .. read more
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Jen
My God April, you created such poem. That's nice. Super likes to all the stanzas. You wish to be all the positive things and the poem generates positive energy as well.

Well, you know i need to understand one thing that's stanza 3 :-
bewitching enticement
both sinful and divine.

will you please explain it all? 'Cause angels are the godly things, how they can be shown beguiling human beings and enticing sinful things as well???

Thank you so much for sharing with me, this excellent piece of art. keep it up (y)

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AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

this was a scribble that I wrote while daydreaming at work to be interpreted as the reader sees fit... read more
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That's a wonderful piece of writing. The use of words is very good. The rhyming is perefct. On a whole,amazing. Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Thank you for this lovely review---not sure how I missed it... my apologies.. it is nice to meet you.. read more
wordsofheart

9 Years Ago

My pleasure. It's okay. Nice to meet you too.
Well,it's your wish entirely.Thanks :)
lovely poetry! so soft and fantastical. makes me feel or romantic inside :-)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

thank you so much.. I am glad you enjoyed this scribble... was daydreaming at work:)
"If"
The title itself attracted my attention.
You painted the words on the screen like a painters paints its canvas.
The choice of words is great! Beautiful poem :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

well hello!.. nice to meet you.. thank you for this lovely review, I am so glad you enjoyed.. I woul.. read more
Eleanor

9 Years Ago

This want suppose to be a favour :p
I really liked this one, that's the reason I reviewed it.<.. read more
Eleanor

9 Years Ago

And BTW hello :)
Nice to meet you too.
Star Flower Angel Dream Thought. These bold headliner words are by themselves a poem, and you poeticize around each one of those words in a creative, and rhythmic way. I like when you liken the dream to/ Magnetic illusion. very cool way to describe the energy we build upon and harness in our deepest sleep.


Diego

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

thank you for an equally detailed, insightful review.. I am tickled you enjoyed this scribble.. I wr.. read more
Pretty font! Ah, so this is what it is to feel like the brightest elements of our world, the earth...

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

thank you.. if only.... :)

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