~Liberating Wings Of Love~

~Liberating Wings Of Love~

A Poem by AprilRN1210
"

.........

"







“Time is too slow for those who wait, too swift for those who fear, too long for those who grieve, too short for those who rejoice, but for those who love, time is eternity.


Oscar Wilde














 

 

Retracing the places you drew in my heart

embracing the spaces….. while miles apart

mind chases replacement…. erasing the pain

yet glacial traces… of… recognition remain. 

 

 

Residual reminders find their way into musing

rewinding the clock gets rather confusing

ticking of time assigns………. it’s time to try

redesigning these…. pretty wings… to fly. 

 

 

Yearning, learning….. the game… in order to play

fighting despite obstacles in the way

trials and tribulations linger….. a while

stylishly stamping…… revamping a smile. 

 

 

Lies no longer disguised behind these eyes

seducing sighs…… shuffling surprise

love liberated, deliberately set free

flying high in the sky taking you with me.

 

 

 














© 2015 AprilRN1210



Author's Note

AprilRN1210

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Featured Review

// Lies no longer disguised behind these eyes
seducing sighs…… shuffling surprise
love liberated, deliberately set free
flying high in the sky taking you with me. //

Your last stanza is out of this world, April! Sometimes we want to rewind time but we can't, we have to live in the now and accept it, mistakes and all. I agree with everything Ashira has said, we do have to remodel our wings to keep us flying high. I have missed you and reading this!

Gorgeous! xoxo

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

Hey Noodle girl!!.. I have missed YOU too!... I admit, this is one of my favorites and am tickled th.. read more



Reviews

Wow. You really said it all with this piece...all I can say is that...you're amazing.

Posted 3 Months Ago


AprilRN1210

3 Months Ago

Thank you again for your kid words, I appreciate it.
This is an absolutely fun read! Great flow and musicality and I especially like the clever play with assonance and rhymes in between the lines of each stanza (as well as at the end). Well done!

Posted 4 Months Ago


AprilRN1210

4 Months Ago

thank you, I appreciate your time and thoughts.
I am a total nature lover to say the least. Its all about hummingbirds, caterpillars, and butterflies. As I read this personal poem of writing. I thought of the butterfly!

Open them wings April and fly...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much, I appreciate it.. nice to meet you, I look forward to reading some of your pieces.. read more
Arthur Henn

2 Years Ago

Your very welcome April.
THIS ...is what I'M talking about April.
The feeling of each poetic thermal taking me higher and thrilling.
great write...

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

Well hey you!.. glad you enjoyed the journey sir.. Always a pleasure to see you and hear your though.. read more
I love the style and design of this poem. Very good work. With me, it resonated.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

It is the highest compliment for a writer when you can touch others with your words.. Thank you, I a.. read more
Stephen

2 Years Ago

Nice to meet you, ill be reading more of your work
Well articulated thought. I so much appreciate the alternate rhyme. The last two line really capture the sense of love. "Love liberated, deliberatly set free
Flying high in the sky taking you with me."
Well done.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

I am glad that you enjoyed, Thank you..
// Lies no longer disguised behind these eyes
seducing sighs…… shuffling surprise
love liberated, deliberately set free
flying high in the sky taking you with me. //

Your last stanza is out of this world, April! Sometimes we want to rewind time but we can't, we have to live in the now and accept it, mistakes and all. I agree with everything Ashira has said, we do have to remodel our wings to keep us flying high. I have missed you and reading this!

Gorgeous! xoxo

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

Hey Noodle girl!!.. I have missed YOU too!... I admit, this is one of my favorites and am tickled th.. read more
Very Thoughtfully Representd Work, I Like Your Imagination & The Style u have Put This On Across So Easily InWords

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much for this lovely review. It is nice to meet you.... I am glad you enjoyed this.. :)
Wonderful April! We often sit and wonder what if and have the notion that is too short. We fear a lot and fail to succeed based on our fears....especially when it comes down to love. Love is a game played again and again in life and we just seem to keep going back....no matter the failings, the hurt, the trials and tribulations there is something about love that we return for. Wounds heal but the scars remain and as I often say "a lesson learned is a lesson earned"
You have a warm heart April and and this piece alone shows your emotion and heartache. Well done girl!

Troy

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

Thank you Troy... this is not only kind, it is insightful and incredibly thoughtful.. you have an eq.. read more
I really enjoyed it. Thought it was beautiful writing. Oh, the love in those eyes - you are a great writer. Sounds like he really let you down. Of course, it's mine to feel now, and I do. Love is such a tricky thing. I just love it. Just re-read it. You are a great writer. Thank you.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

2 Years Ago

you are so sweet, girl.. thank you so much for this lovely review.. I am glad you enjoyed.. I admit... read more
Confuser

2 Years Ago

Haven't thought of myself as a "girl" in many years, but guess we will always be in our hearts. It .. read more

First Page first
Previous Page prev
1
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

1708 Views
82 Reviews
Rating
Shelved in 4 Libraries
Added on September 3, 2014
Last Updated on April 26, 2015
Tags: love, life

Author

AprilRN1210
AprilRN1210

MS



About
Just a simple, old-fashioned nurse who writes to tell the stories of my heart and appease the voices in my head.. more..

Writing
Worth Worth

A Poem by AprilRN1210


Band-Aid Band-Aid

A Poem by AprilRN1210



Related Writing

People who liked this story also liked..


Que Sera, Sera Que Sera, Sera

A Poem by s y e


Street Kids Street Kids

A Poem by s y e





Advertise Here Advertise Here
Want to advertise here? Get started for as little as $5