~Liberating Wings Of Love~

~Liberating Wings Of Love~

A Poem by AprilRN1210
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“Time is too slow for those who wait, too swift for those who fear, too long for those who grieve, too short for those who rejoice, but for those who love, time is eternity.


Oscar Wilde












 

 

Retracing the places you drew in my heart

embracing the spaces….. while miles apart

mind chases replacement…. erasing the pain

yet glacial traces… of… recognition remain. 

 

 

Residual reminders find their way into musing

rewinding the clock gets rather confusing

ticking of time assigns………. it’s time to try

redesigning these…. pretty wings… to fly. 

 

 

Yearning, learning….. the game… in order to play

fighting despite obstacles in the way

trials and tribulations linger….. a while

stylishly stamping…… revamping a smile. 

 

 

Lies no longer disguised behind these eyes

seducing sighs…… shuffling surprise

love liberated, deliberately set free

flying high in the sky taking you with me.

 

 

 



© 2015 AprilRN1210


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// Lies no longer disguised behind these eyes
seducing sighs…… shuffling surprise
love liberated, deliberately set free
flying high in the sky taking you with me. //

Your last stanza is out of this world, April! Sometimes we want to rewind time but we can't, we have to live in the now and accept it, mistakes and all. I agree with everything Ashira has said, we do have to remodel our wings to keep us flying high. I have missed you and reading this!

Gorgeous! xoxo

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Hey Noodle girl!!.. I have missed YOU too!... I admit, this is one of my favorites and am tickled th.. read more



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beautiful!!
effortless, expressive and dipped in honey!!!
amazing poetry!!
i loved it!!!
:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

glad i could make you smile..............it's a pleasure to read your poems!!!
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

that you did... and thank you again..
Pushkar Prabhat

9 Years Ago

you are welcome.......:) :)
Ahhhh, April...This one is such a refreshing, beautiful stretch of the fairy wings. I love the imagery...I love how you constructed it so each stanza takes up the whole screen. It matches beautifully with the song you paired with it. Awesome!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

hey girl!... making a second go 'round with this one eh?.. I admit, it is one of my favorites.. make.. read more
Bright Ocean Star

9 Years Ago

hugs to you, too! :)
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

**happy dance** wahoo!
that was very wonderful work, you expressed this well.. great work

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Thank you so much!.. I am so glad you enjoyed this one.. nice to meet you:)
stars are far

9 Years Ago

always my pleasure
So smooth how you take us away to a place where we can fly like many childhood dreams of old the dream of fling was a dream of mine. I wanted to face the world from above send down from heaven my overflowing love cuddled and kettles all in a row holding you tight and never letting you go. Much pleasure i got in reading your works for the the poet with knowledge to bring things to life. bless you April from this moment on. Guidance from God shall be sent your way. Hope this comment finds you in good health and may you be blessed with a little bit of wealth.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

oh my goodness, thank you so much for this kind, thoughtful, sweet review. wow.. I don't know what t.. read more
This poem makes me think of my own situation..and sometimes hope is what keeps me clinging on
Beautiful poem :) you are a damn good writer
-Sunya

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

oh wow!.. thank you so much.. you have just made my day!.. that hope is the only thing we have somet.. read more
Sunya

9 Years Ago

Yes we are definitely stronger than that :) Thankyou for that :)
AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

you're welcome, and thank you!..
I love that Oscar Wilde quote. I really like your poem, the way you've detailed the treasure of love and happy memories.

NOTES: I found myself deleting most of the forced pauses in your prose. The visual of all this periods looks good, but detracts from your words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

thank you for this thoughtful review... and will reevaluate the pauses... they are more to help with.. read more
MomzillaNC

9 Years Ago

You're welcome. But, remember, my comments are only ever suggestions. You're the poet and only you k.. read more
Liberate away, liberate away.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

workin on it :)

April, I love the smooth, breezy flow that dominates your poetry. You are a gifted writer, my friend. Love this one. I love the way you constructed the poem, and the song you paired with it. It is a pleasure reading your words, as always. I'm wishing you well, my friend...:)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

Hey girl, thank you so much and I wish you the same... this is such an awesome review and am tickled.. read more
You know me and how much I love romantic poetry...and this my friend is lovely. You had me with the Oscar Wilde quote and drew me in even further with the soft tone of your words. The first verse is my favorite..those we love, though perhaps gone, still remain in a very special place in our heart. This my friend is a heartprint. Love it.

:) Julie

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

oooooh, I made heartprint status.. wahooo!.. I adore your romantic writes so much, that means a lot .. read more
Your words flow like honey here, April. Learning the game - and then ultimately flying free... what could be better? Enjoyed this!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AprilRN1210

9 Years Ago

what could be better indeed girl.. Thank you.. I admit, this is one of my favorites I have done rece.. read more

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