Thoughts

Thoughts

A Poem by Arabdha

In wordless worlds you bloom...
your arms-
distant meandering willows of commotion..

I wonder how you pervade
the sea of serenity I choose to call my abode

remnants of your chaotic presence still linger
jarring with the tranquility of my existence..

I wish the willows forget to bloom..
and that amnesia befalls your dreams...

I wish your world moves to a rapid apocalypse..
and your roots shattered..
by a diabolical love you could never fathom..!

© 2013 Arabdha



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I enjoyed your thoughts. I like the flow of the poem and the questions brought to life by the poem.
"I wish the willows forget to bloom..
and that amnesia befalls your dreams..."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. The above lines are my favorite.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arabdha

4 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote..its so nice of you to go through the poem !



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Nice thoughts....strong words...nice

Posted 2 Months Ago


Excellent! Well written, very good. I have read some of your works and some are a bit so so. This one is definitely one of your better writes. I love it! Thank you for letting me read it! Keep writing, learning and improving!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The wrestlings of your mind make good reading, I like the closing line, that says it all, the construct of a real love that no thought could conjure. Great writing, I enjoyed this very much.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arabdha

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much :-)
I enjoyed your thoughts. I like the flow of the poem and the questions brought to life by the poem.
"I wish the willows forget to bloom..
and that amnesia befalls your dreams..."
Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry. The above lines are my favorite.
Coyote

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arabdha

4 Years Ago

Thank you Coyote..its so nice of you to go through the poem !
This was an interesting read. I'm not sure if the flow was meant to be very ethereal and less concrete, but it worked nicely for this.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arabdha

4 Years Ago

So glad you liked the piece :-)
a great write, from the land of Tagore...fine job !

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arabdha

4 Years Ago

Thank you so much for reviewing 'Thoughts'.Have a wonderful day ahead :)
Whoa!! SUCH wonderful imagery... creativity and expression both at their peaks... goes to my favorites :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arabdha

4 Years Ago

Thank you..beyondpen ! Your words are truly encouraging :-)
okay, i am in awe here. when i read this the first time i thought it was overcooked, too many clever words and an overflow of dictionary...but i reread it....and i reread it...and i reread it...each time this grew better and better and made more sense and finally just slapped me in the face with how brilliant it truly is. there is a depth here which resonates and permeates the very psyche. well penned!

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arabdha

4 Years Ago

Hey quinfinn..
I'm really glad you like it so much ! Thank you for taking the time and reviewi.. read more

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Added on June 3, 2013
Last Updated on June 4, 2013
Tags: thoughts, worry, time, life

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Arabdha
Arabdha

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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