Ties..

Ties..

A Poem by Arabdha

Often young
I was told...

Of friendships that last forever..
beyond the definitions that
bind age and time...


from the summer haze
to the happy tidings of youth..
from the glory of bright meadows
to the lump of bones that lay in the dust
I could tell every second that was..
replay and relive
all that you were..


so I didn't quite understand..
when they said pay your respects
and bid adieu..
cause when I looked back..
you stood there smiling..
the way you always were !

© 2013 Arabdha



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Very interesting write. I like the format, it almost felt intentionally choppy as if you started to get a flow going but wanted the reader to slow down. I don't know if it was intentional but it was awesome :) well written. Keep writing, keep learning, keep improving.

Posted 3 Years Ago


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Very interesting write. I like the format, it almost felt intentionally choppy as if you started to get a flow going but wanted the reader to slow down. I don't know if it was intentional but it was awesome :) well written. Keep writing, keep learning, keep improving.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Yes, sometimes they just stand there and smile...and sometimes they take your hand and lead you away from the abyss...it is true that some people stay with you as long as you live...as a warm hug, or as a watchful gaze, or a voice in your head, or as a familiar smell, or a pat on your back, or as the occasional skip in your heartbeat.
Thank you for writing this..

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quaint, thoroughly emotive and well written Arabdha! Enjoyed this immensely!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Arabdha

4 Years Ago

Thank Michael..you're always kind :)
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What an absolutely amazing poetry of a love that refuses to die :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Arabdha

4 Years Ago

Its the understanding of poets like you who make poetry this beautiful :) Thank you !
beyondpen

4 Years Ago

Ah! Modesty thy name is Arabdha :)
Arabdha

4 Years Ago

Hahaa...hardly but merci !
That is true Dear..Friendship is a sacred bond and if valued ,It can last forever... Nice one :D

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Arabdha

4 Years Ago

It is...thank you !
This just sings to you, like a sweet and happy melody. Very nice.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Arabdha

4 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by !
A perfected piece that reads easily, well done, good read.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Arabdha

4 Years Ago

Thank you Thomas...thats really nice of you !
damn! this is utterly superb! this is one of those writes which goes right to the spirit with its message...instant fave!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Arabdha

4 Years Ago

Thank you Quinfinn...I have a poetry reading today and I'm a bunch of nerves ! your words have given.. read more
Another example of excellent work from India !

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Arabdha
Arabdha

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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i am 23..a thinker and a dreamer..life is hard..and i'm just fumbling my way through it..writing is my constant companion and escape.. I write likeAgatha ChristieI Write Like by Mémoires,.. more..

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