You and Me

You and Me

A Poem by Arabdha
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sometimes ties between two people are so strong that distance and space cease to matter..and even when they are not around,they are with you every moment..

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We share dreams,notions and visions..
An eternity of candid emotions..
Its an unseen bond that holds us together..
Its austere beauty making us believe in now and forever..
And even if I'm not there in your life..
I will be with you every moment and manifest as your conscience..
Our bond would thrive and grow in the distant world we created together..
Building on..
Stronger than ever..

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Mar 19, 2011


© 2011 Arabdha


Author's Note

Arabdha
this is not the kind of stuff i normally write..so please be honest with your reviews..happy reading!

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just who? is this he and she? have you heard of a band called she and he? you might want to look into it.....im a musician and lyrics are really a dime a dozen, but well drafted poetry is hard to come by......could you be a little more specific about this, names and places can so easily be revieled yet also kept secret.....hearing me? k

Posted 13 Years Ago


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This piece was really nice to read, it does give a nice feeling.
But your note made me curious to know the kind of stuff you 'normally' write :)


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Hmmm... Very interesting and mind rattling... I loved this part best
Our bond would thrive and grow in the distant world we created together..

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I enjoyed the read

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Burns yellow with the fire of true love...It isn't hard to see why this won a prize. Amazing work here...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well well well waht do you know ... this is wonderful ... being in a long distance relationship for almost over 3 years now .. I can relate to this literally .. and otherwise .. Great write !!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

To hear your lover in your heart from far away and know they are with you keeping you strong is a wonderful feeling. Though distance makes the heart grow founder it is also hard to be away from the ones you love.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A powerful and beautiful poem. I like the desire and emotion of your words. Take two strong people to walk on the same path to appreciate a strong love. I like the ending to the outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

just who? is this he and she? have you heard of a band called she and he? you might want to look into it.....im a musician and lyrics are really a dime a dozen, but well drafted poetry is hard to come by......could you be a little more specific about this, names and places can so easily be revieled yet also kept secret.....hearing me? k

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great job i really liked it

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Arabdha
Arabdha

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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i am 23..a thinker and a dreamer..life is hard..and i'm just fumbling my way through it..writing is my constant companion and escape.. I write likeAgatha ChristieI Write Like by Mémoires,.. more..

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