Turmoil

Turmoil

A Poem by Arabdha

           turmoil
     shattered dreams
  love,hatred,confusion
fighting,losing,lost cause
            jinxed

© 2011 Arabdha



Author's Note

Arabdha
trying my hand at writing a cinquain..inspired by the group-'I Challenge You' :)

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I know this, like the back of my hand. Lovely.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good to have a go at styles that you do not normally use, but remember that the secret is just to write. Just write.
Do not let style overcome content. Ever.
You have done it well, but we all know that you are a clever writer.
ATB
alex.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You captured most of my life in a few short lines. Amazing choice of words and great use of the format. Brilliant work

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Chaos in one saying. That how life is sometimes.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Nice. You really outdid yourself. Packing your ideas in these few lines isn't that easy .

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I think you used the form well. Your poem gives a subject describes it well, and finally makes a conclusion about the entire episode. Nice shot at the cinquain.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

OOOOHHHH NICE!
Superb love! All encompassing and consuming, I LOVE this!
xx

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cinquain eh.....no wonder I have not tried it, to be able to adjust your writing style to addapt to this constraint and still be able to get your thoughts across is to me quite marvelous, so for that i applaud you :O)

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You really work at writing and I truly admire that! You've described the feeling so clearly in spite of the containment of the style. Bravo.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good try..!!!!

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Arabdha

Bangalore, Karnataka, India



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