Tell me the truth now. This is my first poem in two months and probably only the sixth I\'ve ever written.

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Like Bluessadmood said, it's obvious what you're dealing with. Poetry is the one thing that shows us transparently to the reader. It's a personal thing. Poetry is part of my breathing. Everything I do, is scribbled into a piece of poetry. Now, I know that has nothing to do with what you wrote. Forgive me. I was quite thrilled to see that you posted a piece of poetry. It caught me off guard actually. I do not think you are bad. If you can write books, you have the talent to do poetry. Okay. Here is my advice: Keep writing poetry. You would, probably, post better pieces than me. And, with time, you will find it to be like breahting. Keep writing S.D. You have a talent in books and poetry. Both are good. You may like one more than the other; but the other should not be a closed and locked door. I think you need to keep going. Of course, unless you do not like it. I would understand that. . .
Never mind.
Write me on when we can talk again. . . It's has been three of fours days, maybe more. Have a great night!

BLFK

Posted 1 Year Ago