I am still the same.....................

I am still the same.....................

A Poem by mystic soul
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To my love.........................

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My heart still throbs, with the mention of your name....
My eyes still shines, with the very glimpse of yours....
My face still glows like it used to be, when i think about you......
My lips still smiles...at midst of all the pains and sufferings....

Tell me my love....
If this is not love then what is it????????

My heart still beats for you,
I still want to be with you....

You are the only one in my life,
you are my soul.....you are my life...
without you I can't survive......

Tell me my love...
If I say "I Love You",
Would you say, " me too"?????????????????

© 2009 mystic soul


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hmmmm... looks like you are hooked onto someone .... nice and sweet

Posted 14 Years Ago


I ask myself these same question sometimes. You captured my heart with this and It's beautiful. I loved it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


i really enjoyed reading it.... good write.....

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wonderful poem!!! good write!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


omg!!! this is soooooo good!!! it's really very heart touching..

Posted 14 Years Ago


seems like you are in love... You have written this one so beautifully.... I wish i could have been the person addressed here... lolzzz.......

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is very nice and touching, mystic soul. Surely the person who you address is favorably impressed.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like your writing style. I've seen it a few times before, but I never liked it at any other time. I really do like the way you do it though. Very nice diction and syntax :)
Keep writing, you are good at it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

a very sweet, innocent poem. nice

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 11, 2009

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