painful smile.........

sometimes we smile to hide our pain....

whenever i recalls my good old memories..

i smile even in midst of all the pain...

For quite a short period of time,

happiness came my way..

Leaving me with intense pain in my heart...

My heart aches, but i still smiles.

those memories are so powerful ,

that ,it leaves a smile on my face..

 

Once Life seemed to be smiling to me..

everything was just too perfect for me..

but this was a conspiracy of my destiny.....

It made me laugh, so that it could make me cry even louder.

But i won't let it happen..

those memories are strong enough to keep me going as far as i can go...

 

so what if there isn't any hope..

so what if  i am sorrounded by dark clouds of grief..

i am still going to smile..

i'll laugh at destiny to play such a cruel game...

 

 

Reviews

[Khaaki]

destiny is a cruel player... it mocks u in d face... but remember the darkest hour is just before dawn... so look forward to a new beginning... nice write

[RedRose1250]

i love it..it kinda explaains me..

[A Touch of Insanity:)]

It's certainly a strange piece but I like it!

[cartera]

An interesting poem. Bit concerned at the seeming acceptance of a lack of hope in the final stanza; for one so young .... mmmm.
Anyhow, well written.

[heart_breaker]

i loved this one!!! wonderful....

[Blackcat]

your pain and agony is clearly visible form this poem.... You are really good at expressing yourself through words.... great one!!! keep writing....

[Mystic]

very well written... i really enjoyed this one.... you are truly a mystery!

[sweet angel]

your poem is so well written that i could feel your pain..... indeed a very good one.... you are indeed very talented.....

[Dead_End]

you are right whenever we recall our good days it fills us with tears of joy... it gives us strength to go on.... Wonderful poem.. Mystic.... You are really amazing...

[Tenten]

universl emotions, this gives me a tight smile, i rememer these feelings, that pain, very good piece at involving and empathizing with your reader, just clean it up with editting and spacing. i enjoyed this, haven't thought about that hurt for a while. thank you.