Eternal Fight...

Beneath the darkness,
lies a new born ray of light of
unknown origin,
 unknown destination...
silently challenging the dark emperor,
with his innocent smile.
Challenging pain,
challenging fear,
to bring him down!
Passing every test that he was put through,
thereby  growing stronger and stronger!
Giving hope,
showing way to those who couldn't make it!
He is on his way to take back, what was once his!
Day-by-day his army growing stronger,
Light will definitely take over!
Much awaited fight has begun
but with the sacrifice of that ray of light
of unknown origin,
but now he got his destination!

Reviews

[Dead_End]

Good job Cutie! To mark a victory all you need is a small courage and faith like that small ray of light had in himself... i really liked the concept... this poem delivers a very strong message! Even if you are in a situation where there is no hope and failure is 99% sure ... you will certainly win if try... initial steps are very important and winners know this very well! Even though that light has to sacrifice but it's not his failure! he won 'cause he survived...he passed the test ... he dared to come forward against dark emperor! good write!

[paul]

familiar and unique at the same time. simple and complex. inspiring and beautiful.

[Lost_Love]

great poem! this is how it has to be. light has to win , light has to get stronger, light has to take over coz its destined to be a winner...

[blob blob]

"silently challenging the dark emperor,
with his innocent smile..."---gorgeous!!!
i love this line--a really magnificent poem:-)

J:)

[ASMIDEEP]

Wow!
Its so right!
Its so bright!
Atlast won the fight!
Thats our light!

Great poem...Keep it up and God bless you...

[Blackcat]

excellent! this one brings out the truth that we often ignore.... when we are in any problem we tend to increase it by loosing hope and faith in our ability.... All it needs is some hope to mark the victory!
Good Work dear!

[Khaaki]

marvelous... this one has real depth... every long journey begins with a single step... even a spark can ignite a fire... a person should not forget those who grasp his hand even for a few steps...

[Mystic]

Wonderful poem! the depth of the poem makes it even more interesting! I like the message delivered... Positivity is all we need to win the existing combat with darkness! great write! thanks for sharing it!