Chapter 30/31 *Untitled*

Chapter 30/31 *Untitled*

A Chapter by Tsukin Archangel

Volt lay in her cot, her eyes closed her mind awake.  Anger pulsed through her veins, anger and a sense of betrayal. Dare thought he was being quiet, thought he was being considerate by not waking her but no he was hurting her by going to Darius instead of her, trusting him with his troubles instead of her. Suddenly Dare’s voice began to rise, his thoughts of being quiet and considerate gone. He was in distress, and then suddenly he stopped talking entirely as if he was pushed into a deep sleep. 
An eerie silence fell on the room, a silence coated in something, something dangerous. Volt shut her eyes tight, not daring to move, hardly breathing, waiting feverishly, for it to pass. A cool hand pressed against her face, and a voice whispered in her ear. An old, strong and steady voice.
“They remember nothing.”
Volt closed her eyes tighter, refusing to speak, even though the intruder was fully aware that she was awake.
“Very well, remain silent.”
And then the voice was gone, the feeling of danger passing leaving another feeling behind. A feeling of tiredness. She opened her eyes and inhaled sharply, clinging to the covers on her bed a single tear trickling out of her eye.


© 2012 Tsukin Archangel


Author's Note

Tsukin Archangel
Tell me what u think sorry for lateness~

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... Was the intruder a metaphor for something? I feel like I was supposed to understand this, but I'm confused. Sorry.

Oh-- I can't wait for it to continue. This would be a sad story to leave unfinished. Don't rush, but I'm eager to read more! : )

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the chapter still and can't wait for the next one XD Nevermind the slowness if nice chapters is what we get in return. Take your time. Hahaha Volt is cute in this chapter XD just had to say

Nice chapter

Posted 11 Years Ago


Katherine Enma Pineapple

11 Years Ago

lol the characters are so loveable :D Aww I'll give some love to Dare ;) hahaha good luck
Tsukin Archangel

11 Years Ago

lol thanks and yay ok lets c...just gotta post this new cover then write that chapter >;3
Katherine Enma Pineapple

11 Years Ago

welcome XDD hmm new? maybe I'd listen to it next week hehehe good luck with that :3
Well, its short but still a good one. Volt is sooo annoyed by it. And by the sound of this chapter I am guessing she would do something later on that'll be soo not good.
Enjoyed it. Keep writing :)
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Anonymous Girl

11 Years Ago

I think she'll snap at some point because she snappend before.. I don't think she is going to stay q.. read more
Tsukin Archangel

11 Years Ago

lol true silence isnt really her thing
Anonymous Girl

11 Years Ago

Lol.. It surely isn't
... It's short and one thing Volt is so jealous, huh... made me know the reason why she is the top fave first of all women can relate sometimes... *but i can't yet*
anyway, here's something I forgot to mention... work a lot on Dare he is the main character he should be at least top one for the favorites...


Posted 11 Years Ago


Michael Perez

11 Years Ago

I don't want to do this, but for the sake of the story, why not? I agree with Rhianne on Dare, he wa.. read more
Tsukin Archangel

11 Years Ago

yeah i was planning to try and make him more relateable already thanks for teh tip
Rhianne Ney

11 Years Ago

You can do it, Tsukin... Fight! lol
Short chapter, yet I still enjoy your work :)
Keep going!
100/100

Posted 11 Years Ago


Tsukin Archangel

11 Years Ago

woot :3 glad u liked it :3

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Added on September 9, 2012
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