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Repainting the Heart

Repainting the Heart

A Story by Archia

Sometimes a heart needs another layer of paint


He slung his backpack onto the floor and settled into one of the chairs. The unfortunate green colour, which once may have passed for mint or pastel lime was now a mottled, cracking reminder of a past long gone. At least, he thought, the light shades had a new gloss to them.

It had been four years and sixteen days since he’d last walked through these doors. It was easy to count the time it had been since his heart had cracked.

“Hey.” A man appeared and smiled at him with the gaze of a friend. “You used to come here years ago, all the time didn’t you?”

“Yeah,” he says, vaguely remembering him.

“You always came with that girl.” His face suddenly turned downwards. “I’m sorry mate.”

“It’s alright.”

He hadn’t wondered, as he had clutched her in his arms, whether it would be alright again. He knew, as she died on the floor of the café with mint green chairs, that his heart would only crack like the paint. He had waited years to have the courage to come back, and now, years later, he was slowly starting to repaint his heart.

He smiled. “It’ll be alright.”

© 2017 Archia

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I love this parallelism between his heart and the paint. So touching. Thank you for entering this!

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1 Year Ago

Thank you so much, and thanks for holding the contest
This brought tears to my eyes. I like the imagery of repainting his heart.

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1 Year Ago

Thank you so much for reading.

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Added on May 28, 2017
Last Updated on May 28, 2017
Tags: love, romance, heartbreak, cafe



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