Romeo Oh Romeo

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Romeo oh Romeo

Is this how it ends?

 

I’m drowning in sorrow and woe.

It is now the end begins.

 

We did not end the same.

She left me for no clear reasons.

 

I will not be toyed around in a game,

Or tossed around like a leaf in changing seasons.

 

Maybe one day we can make it, but not now.

I feel like Hamlet with this question on my mind.

 

I might make it through somehow.

My heart just has to find a way out of this bind.

Reviews

[alesuriko]

This is great, I love the Shakespeare references, really well done! The rhyme scheme is great and the structure of the stanzas really suits the pace of the poem. Great imagery and metaphor! I really hate Romeo and I love this poem!

[Jersey]

This is really good, I loved the lines of:
"I'm drowning in sorrow and woe."
"I will not be toyed around in a game,
Or tossed around like a leaf in changing seasons."
The emotion is defiantely aparent in this, and I know the feeling.

[MiidniightSoul]

I love this one. A powerful poem.
"I’m drowning in sorrow and woe. It is now the end begins." These lines are very well written. Very good.
Besides that, it's a very beautiful poem. Keep it up :)