The Daring Winter

The Daring Winter

A Poem by Arghya Samaddar

When the paths get covered by dense fog,
when the sun sleeps a bit more,
when the forests wear its new clothes,
when the faded yellow light brings joy,
And, when the yellow rays in the lush green woods splinter,
The nature tells you, it's a new winter.

Winter, like the poverty, is left all alone,
the skin of winter is hammered with the kind stone.
The fresh blood of winter travels in the veins of summer,
spreading joy and giving life like a flowing river.
The warm summer on the skin of joy,
snatched from the poor winter boy,
Signifying the universal diversity of winter & joy.

The joy of red & white caps,
makes the sorrow nights collapse,
though transiently, but for eternity.
The merry nights, and the friendly christmas naps,
with the gifts, fulfill the desire of the young chaps,
marked with utter serenity.

And then, the melting of snow with visible paths,
the smile of trees with green grass,
Bids goodbye to the injured winter.
The winter clears the path for the next traveller,
the diversity of winter & joy prevails even further,
Truth stands upright, the change fails to change the murder.

By Arghya Samaddar

© 2016 Arghya Samaddar



Author's Note

Arghya Samaddar
ignore grammar problems, what do you think of the writing style ?

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Great work...indeed a very nice poem which gave immense joy to me especially because winter is my favourite season..in fact , this is the best poem i have ever read on winter...you carved your ideas in a beautiful manner through use of powerful words in this wonderful poem..actually i felt like the poem had a constant flow and i am really happy that it had rhyming words in it which added to its beauty....Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...eager to read your next writing...
Riddhi

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arghya Samaddar

1 Year Ago

thanks a lot for the review



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Great work...indeed a very nice poem which gave immense joy to me especially because winter is my favourite season..in fact , this is the best poem i have ever read on winter...you carved your ideas in a beautiful manner through use of powerful words in this wonderful poem..actually i felt like the poem had a constant flow and i am really happy that it had rhyming words in it which added to its beauty....Keep on writing and thanks for sharing...eager to read your next writing...
Riddhi

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arghya Samaddar

1 Year Ago

thanks a lot for the review
Because English is not your first
Language I really admire the fact
That you can write poetry in another
Language, and also I think it is very good.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Strong thoughts in the words.
"The winter clears the path for the next traveller,
the diversity of winter & joy prevails even further,
Truth stands upright, the change fails to change the murder."
The above lines, solid statements. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You brought up all the scenes pretty eloquently. Loved it.
I would say you to avoid putting commas in phrases. Generally a smooth flow seems to be better rather than jerking in between.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arghya Samaddar

1 Year Ago

thanks for ur review . I would keep it in mind
Its beautiful!
You have quite eloquently woven this tale, Arghya!
I liked the flow and the vivid, fresh perspective each stanza brought.
Very well done!
Keep writing.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Arghya Samaddar

1 Year Ago

Thanks Jyoti
Jyoti_Ablaze

1 Year Ago

You are welcome.
Good job ..

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Kolkata, West Bengal, India



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