Beauty and the Beast (title may change)

not done yet. just need feed back. there will be more to the piece.

Too sweet was the sound

Softer and softer as it hit the mouth

Too beautiful was the sight

As it burned to the ground

 

The voice that birthed calm

Precious brushes against the lips

The light that broke through the night

As it set off every single bomb

 

Every single moment fractured

Every single memory frayed

Strained, stained and betrayed

Right there where we laid

 

Where the sound of your voice calmed me

Where the touch of your mouth soothed me

The sight of your eyes saved me

Just enough to burn me to the ground

 

 

Author's Note

not finished with this yet. just would like some feedback. i will be writing more to this.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

Not sure that it needs any more...I am no expert but I know what I like. This is deep enough, strong enough and LONG enough in my humble opinion...It came from the heart and FILLED the page