Aurora

another oldie but a goodie

Slowly, the lights fall

Angels take a glimpse of Earth

As we see Heaven

Reviews

[Clockwork]

I think that is a beautiful way of describing the northern lights. Great choice of form to describe this wonderful phenomenon. It has always been one of my favorite things and you described it so masterfully in such limited space.

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