First Kiss

Most romantic thing I've ever written. Even though I've never felt it myself.

And so the curatins of light radiating

 and enveloping her face

as her smooth and red lips

 moved with song,

devoured me in rythmic trance

 and cascaded my mind

with flutters of fairies

 and pixie dust.

Author's Note

I have actually never kissed anyone. And I am a girl and I'm not gay and not planning on kissing a girl with smooth red lips, but this one just kind of came out of me. I don't know how... or necessarily why but it just did. I hope you enjoy and won't judge me on my age and gender on this poem. Thank you. :)

Reviews

[OT]

a very sensate and otherwordly kiss - flutters of fairies and pixie dust!! so well portrayed here! nice, nice, nice!!

[Tyler Allen]

A very vivid description of a... well, kiss. Makes something very simple seem like magic, though. You've done a great job with the description.