Who Hears Me?

Who hears me

When I cry?

Tears so silent

Nearly non-existant.

Like watching the rain

Through the window

In a soundproof room.

No one hears

Not even me.

 

Reviews

[Pete]

very poignant, telling and emotive. well done ... :)

[Windy]

Short and powerful! Very well done and amazingly with so few words you said so very much. There is such a emotion in this you have to keep going back and re reading it. Good job. ;)

[Gaiamethod]

That is really good. It totally expresses those horrible times when there is no-one there. In my healing journey I have been there so many times.
The poem feels so lonely and isolated, so hopeless. Very good write.

[Natalie C]

Oh this was a powerful piece! Filled with raw emotion, trying to find a release.
Keep on writing my friend, those tears will one day end, as you might know by now, seeing that this is a old piece. Have to say I just loved the way you used the rain and soundproof room,
Great thinking...

[Marie]

Emotional, deep. Great job.

[Nanaz]

I am no poet...and words don't come freely....but this is nice...I liked it!!

[Anti-social B***h]

Short but strongly worded. This was well written and a fav of mine.-AB

[Fantasyfairy]

Such a powerful, emotional poem. Beautifully written from the heart. "Tears so silent" a powerful line. Well written, than for sharing hun XX

[TamiViolet i can't log..]

Written from the heart, Arlene. I can feel the pain and the passion. Imagery is superb!
Thank you for sharing with me. Peace. Tamiviolet