Leonardo my Leonardo

tribute to Leonardo Da Vinci

The world through the eyes that never forgets

He tames each stroke gently to prevent regret

For each piece applauds he does get

On every canvas he makes history

On every canvas he illustrates a soul

On every canvas he gives us a future

How would our minds evolve without him?

How would our souls ever rest without him?

With his arts, his inventions and his sayings

He crafted a beautiful future which is now the present

You may be gone, but in our hearts you will forever remain

Reviews

[Calamityofgin]

Huge fan..Especially the wild sketching and inventions..thoughts embodied in the Codex Atlanticus..
For such a thing to exist is a miricle..and the kind of thing that saves me...
This is good..
Wish youd let go the rhyme in the first few lines..feel a little tight..the last thing he was...

Applaud this effort to capture the importance of Leonardo!! Brava!

Love and wishes of brush strokes naked to the eye...
Calamity of Jennifer

[Quill]

glad to see another who appreciates Leo, yeah i did force the first few lines to rhyme, and presented it that way regardless of of how tortuously it came across, well no trying to fix it now, thanks for the review.

[Calamityofgin]

Oh sweet..not tortuous at all...really liked the piece!

[Pete]

great tribute to an amazing man. a masterpiece about a master. he did so much. the epitome of renaissance. good job.

[Quill]

Thank you Pete

[Taino]

A beautiful and insightful tribute to Da Vinci. Very well done!

[Gabriel Enrique Montano]

I love Leonardo! He is my favourite artist and one of the most influential and best minds of all time. Thank you for this piece! Well done!

[Alisa Js]

Beautiful tribute for an amazing artist.

Very well done, you!

Alisa

[d.o.t]

Really quite moving. You can really feel the respect and admiration within the words

[Quill]

thank you, i am glad you like it.

[B. Boileau]

well done, You've unlocked the Da Vinci code Thank you

[Quill]

thanks, you made me smile

[Myra]

I am pleased with this elegy. Good writing! I think elegies are really special and humbling so I am really happy to know how you feel about Da Vinci.

[Quill]

i am really glad, you like it, thanks for the review

[Laura S-C]

I enjoyed reading this poem it is very true. Well done.

[Quill]

i am really glad that you like it