SleepWalker

SleepWalker

A Poem by Quill
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A hope to ignite the concept of deliberate living

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'Every cycle is the same
nothing new, nothing gained
anything dictated is concurred
any occurrence is barely assimilated
a life without aspirations or inspirations
yet you claim to be alive
you claim to be awake
your postulation on existence is nothing but delusion
why are you here
you can't consign an affirmable answer
well neither can anyone else
time may tell, if it cares to
no words can truly clarify existence
though your nature does not permit you to enquire
the wordless proclamation of your being is as definitive as a sleepwalker'

© 2018 Quill


Author's Note

Quill
Would appreciate contradictions, criticisms and additions to the concept.

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Insightful, intelligent, great vocabulary. You say a lot. I like the style of little punctuation and capitalization, as if it is all one thought, and one line cannot exist without the other.

Posted 6 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Quill

6 Years Ago

glad you think of it that way

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Added on February 20, 2018
Last Updated on February 20, 2018
Tags: philosophy, art, psychology, science, motivation, wisdom, lazy, concept, strength, future, people, religion

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Quill
Quill

Abuja, Christian, Nigeria



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