I am familiar with Karunesh's, "Ali Baba," as it is on one of the ten volumes of Buddha Bar CD's that I own. It's a beautiful song, and it's a wonderful compliment to set the mood for the poem which you have written. I also like the photograph between each stanza as it also lends to the environment you are trying to create. They help the reader visualize the things of which you speak.
The message itself, What of Kings and I, if all else were stripped away, is very poignant. The underlying answer bespeaks the real sadness of our world and how we treat one another.
I am a Christian jew..and we lost a large part of my mothers family during Hitlers reign during the Second World war..Why peo[le can't just accept differences in color or religion or how much one has or does not have is beyond me..God is love and we are suppose to love and offer help to anyone that might need it..Kathie
Posted 7 Months Ago
7 Months Ago
the way of the World...thanks Valentine, it is a sad state, but its been like this forever...don't k.. read morethe way of the World...thanks Valentine, it is a sad state, but its been like this forever...don't know what to say other than...And what of Kings and I ...appreciate your review...
This is so deep Art, truly magical how you bring the reader to awareness, and points to think about. Today is all too obvious, everything is easy, but in this poem we are brought back to the many ways in which our ancestors fought, and where there was still a precious value in things. I have been often in this region, I know the richness of their spirit. How poor they may be, it can overcome anything. A wonderful write Art. Even as the music as usual ♫ Excellent.
With this poem i know you are feeling what is happening at present with the world, this emotion evolution taking over mankind, we the simple, we the open and the willing to lay our hearts out for others to consume and do with what they will. But I hear all of your words that are no longer words but now thoughts come to life as they blend with my own. Keep guiding and know that many will follow, for words that are inspiring even the harshest realities can be perceived as inspiration. Thank you for every word.
This poem is simply magic. Brought me to a different world, to a different time. The music, and your comparison of the two worlds make us think. "The king sits upon a worldly throne While I with my poetic form Of travels never seen Question And what of Kings and I? And what of Us and Others? And what of Love and Hate? Beautiful piece, Art.
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*Mary*
i love how the world music has become so popular . The last two wars have brought an awareness of islam to the west...Great than the dehumanization of their religion has been a surge in middle eastern interest .Belly dancing , food , music has grown.
I appreciate the way just put the questions out there. You're not pretending to have any answers of even take any guesses. And again, the music, the imagery, the well thought out words lend themselves to offering your message as multi-experiential. Thank you.