Heroes are alive

Heroes are alive

A Poem by Krithika Raghavan
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This poem has been written in the tezra rima style. It's my first time writing in that style, and I love experimenting.

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They had lived and acheived many a great

Deeds of service, deeds of honour with pride

But just as the useless~ they had their fate.

 

Young, maybe God loved them for it, they died

The others, some similing, some suffering...

Were the oldest, and their loved ones had cried

 

These heroes, called 'immortals' in writing

Died with a bullet or sword in their chest

All left of them are songs minstrels sing

 

Lone authors of the night- with dirty vest

In the day break- rub their eyes and smile~

Magical transcriptions~ they did their best

 

GOLDEN PAGES OF HEROES ARE ALIVE...

 


© 2013 Krithika Raghavan



Author's Note

Krithika Raghavan
I do not think this has come as well as the other poems as mine...

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I like this style, poem has good impact to it, cool light in the tribute vibe to this. Nicely done.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Krithika Raghavan

4 Years Ago

"cool light in the tribute vibe?" gee, thanks;-)
Eric Cox

4 Years Ago

sorry, I was trying to compliment. Is an excellent piece.
Krithika Raghavan

4 Years Ago

Huh? Oh dear, I think I sounded sarcastic, no, I actually thought that the comment was cool;-) No on.. read more
They had lived and achieved many a great
Deeds of service, deeds of honour with pride
But just as the useless~ they had their fate

The more we write the better we develop our style... this was brilliant and inspiring

keep penning...



Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yellow Butterfly

4 Years Ago

Only because you were experimenting... there are so many ways to write poetry.... especially depende.. read more
Krithika Raghavan

4 Years Ago

*smile* Yes, I agree with that too. Thank you;-)
Yellow Butterfly

4 Years Ago

Your welcome..... keep penning your own style.... and inspiring others with your great work on WC. .. read more
I know terza ryma can be a hard style, but you did a wonderful job with this!

Posted 4 Years Ago


Krithika Raghavan

4 Years Ago

Oh, well, that's certainly a nice thing to say. You just made my day;-)
A first attempt at Terza Rima ,a worthy effort M'lady

Posted 4 Years Ago


Krithika Raghavan

4 Years Ago

You think? Hmm... Well then, THank you! It was pretty hard to write, or maybe I was just lacking ins.. read more
Lone authors of the night- with dirty vest

In the day break- rub their eyes and smile~

Magical transcriptions~ they did their best

I like this poem and style. Enjoyable to read. You've done a good job

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krithika Raghavan

4 Years Ago

THank you so very much... That was a beautiful complement you've given me;-)
The fight,live the passion, put your heroes down on the paper let them be life ,rebels ,renegades to win the lost cause,stand tall let them walk with blue light.Peal the joy out of their personality and let us feel them.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krithika Raghavan

4 Years Ago

That was a beautiful way to reply to this comparitively dim poem;-)
Yes, Heroes are alive in the pages, but not in the flesh. Yet I suppose that is a reason why they're alive in the pages. I LIKED it! :) It was a good poem! (trying to be non-lenient) :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Krithika Raghavan

4 Years Ago

Thanks, Sparky... And thanks for trying-_-'
Terra Hart

4 Years Ago

You're welcome! ....I think I was very successful! :)

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