Little Fly

Little Fly

A Poem by Ashadan
"

There are people who wanted to be on top all the time, but sometimes it good to be contented on what you have and what you are

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Little fly,
Staring at the tree.
Trying to reach, what he see.

Little fly,
Looking at the sky.
He spreads his wings, trying to fly.

Little fly,
Went on the place nearby.
Hoping to be kingfishers as they fly.

Little fly,
Stop wishing stronger than a bee.
Even like those birds you see.

Little fly,
Just look and observe thee.
Stop pushing yourself, higher than a tree.

Little fly,
Don't try to deny.
Just be true to yourself, stop telling a lie
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© 2015 Ashadan



Author's Note

Ashadan
Just having a simple poem here

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simplicity is the true way to express oneself

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very nice and sweet poem with the message of being true to self.I liked it..:-)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

thank you for stopping by =)
great poem. nice simple and beautiful. thanks for sharing

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

Thank you for stopping by. i really appreciate it =)
Little fly,
Stop wishing stronger than a bee.
Even like those birds you see.

Beautiful and valuable massage in it friend....

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

Thanks for reviewing this one my friend. I'm glad to hear it =)
um cute? i get the message ...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

thanks that you get it :)
cloakedone

2 Years Ago

nothing to it
I like the message behind this. Everyone needs to learn to be themselves and not compare himself/herself to anyone else. We are all unique individuals, not to be compared. Thanks for sharing this with me :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

Im glad that you like it. Thanks for stopping by
So true some times we strive so much that we forget to just be content in the now..

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

definitely true =) . Thanks for stopping by.
I really enjoy the way this poem flows, and almost classical nature of this poem. It reminds me of an almost Robert Frost like work, but truly original, and well written.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the compliment my friend =)
Edgar Frost Lovecraft

2 Years Ago

Anytime, fellow poet :)
Nice work my friend... sometimes it's great to be content.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

Thank you for appreciating my work my friend =)
Very contemplating, thinking about the relativity of things. Thanks you for sharing. :) Rudi

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

I should be the one thanking you =) thank you for the compliments

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Added on April 25, 2015
Last Updated on April 26, 2015
Tags: Contentment, Hardwork, Ambition, Success, Wish, Dream

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Ashadan
Ashadan

Philippines



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I am simple man that only wants to inspire others true writing. I am a poet wanted to be from the Philippines. I am teenager at heart ^_^ just joking. Ashadan is just my pen name since I started writ.. more..

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