My Hue

My Hue

A Poem by Ashadan
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A poem that expresses one's strong faith towards his creator

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As He strokes my hand with the pencil.
My bosom shouted for the greatness I felt.
My trust made my life so well,
As an ice in summer that will never melt.

As He mixes the colors in my heart,
I mention His name without a reward.
My world's mate almost tear me apart,
But His light says, "Move forward."

As He shades the edge of my faith,
My eyes clearly saw His face.
Even others said that maybe His a myth;
I believe He's the person behind the grace.

As the lines of my life continue,
Color harmony is there to be the best part.
And when it's unpleasant hue,
He'll cast catchy pigment that proves life is an art.


© 2015 Ashadan



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this is beautifully written and could be taken if several ways! i love the thought of it being a guardian angel guiding us ! :))
Love this

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

thanks for your uplifting review =) Im glad you like it.
As an atheist myself I did not understand that it was about God. I thought this was a very good description of the balance between the theme of Love, and Loyalty. I like the idea of hue being used its very psychodelic and I mean that in an artistic way.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

Thanks for sharing your thought. Im always glad if people could also see my writings in different wa.. read more
This one is very deep because it can be taken in so many ways. Like your partner in life of a symbolic of a man and talking about life. Well at least to me it can be taken a couple different ways. I love this poem thanks for sharing with me.

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing my work =) . I'm glad when there are times could also see the other meaning .. read more
is the model comparing the art to a man or is there an actual man here?
if i sound harsh,im not trying to

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

The poem has a hidden message about faith my friend. The speaker within the poem expresses his faith.. read more
cloakedone

2 Years Ago

oh would have got the god thing ,but anyways your welcome
In the third line of the third stanza, it should be "He's" not, His.

I really like this though. I like how you combined God and painting. You did a great job of intertwining them and creating a clear picture for us as readers. Very good write, thank you for sharing!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the comment my friend but what I am referring there is not the possessive case of noun ,I.. read more
Ashadan

2 Years Ago

Thanks for the comment my friend but what I am referring there is not the possessive case of pronoun.. read more
This is a vividly beautiful poem. I really enjoy the detail you put into this, you are a very talented writer :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Nice work buddy! Enjoyed reading this piece :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


Beautiful, Ashadan. Thank you for sharing. :) Rudi

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

thanks Rudi. ^_^ Thank you for always reading my poems =)
Beautiful poem! Really enjoyed it!

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

I'm glad to hear that=) thank you for reviewing this poem ^_^
marcus

2 Years Ago

my pleasure
Your words are an inspiration
Your heart is not a simple red heart, but a precious ruby that shines from within

Posted 2 Years Ago


Ashadan

2 Years Ago

glad you hear that. Your reviews give me stronger pushy to write again and keep on using my pen =)read more
Peggy-Lou

2 Years Ago

I'm certainly very impressed with your writing. It's about how you paint your feelings with words
Ashadan

2 Years Ago

Thanks ^_^ Im glad to hear those kind words

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Tags: Faith, Preserverance, Love, God, Patience, Understanding, Art, Self-confidence

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Ashadan
Ashadan

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I am simple man that only wants to inspire others true writing. I am a poet wanted to be from the Philippines. I am teenager at heart ^_^ just joking. Ashadan is just my pen name since I started writ.. more..

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