Shades of a girl

Beauty isnt what you see its just what u feel

When you were a child happy and wild
How much clothes did you piled
Your work always unfiled
Then who was there
For you to love and care
A lady cute and sweet
Yes she was your mom
Surely a godly form
Whenever you were sad
She thrived to make you glad
Think when you were in her womb
She must have felt like a tomb
But there was always a smile
On her face no sadness traced
When you grow up more
A girl will always come before
To show that she cares for you more
Then she becomes a friend
Roses like her she would always send
Then she becomes your wife
A part of your life
Queen of your messy hive
Then comes a little angel
Yes thats a girl
A beautiful pearl
With beautiful hair that curls
She is always there
Also to take your care
How is it funny
These people who makes our life sunny
Why they have to be a girl like honey
Who are always sweet
Careless and quite
Always ready for a fight
Of course for you
Why they have to sacrifice
For people like you evil and vice
Mom,a wife,a daughter your life
Of course they are queen of you hive
So guys now when you see a girl
Be nice because they are like pearl
And thats how u understand a girl.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW! Amazing work. I am not a good reviewer. I'm really Blown away by Your this piece. Love it. So true and meaningful!

[Ashwin Thakur]

Thank u dreamer i am happy if my poems are reaching far and wide
And especially pakistani brothers and sisters
Leaving u i am not saying u my sister

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hehe OK! You are WELCOME! :D

[Nabeeha Mustafa]

Wow. I really love this one :') Amazing! 'She was your mom. A godly form' (Y)

[Ashwin Thakur]

Thank u nabeeha thats very nice of u

[emmajoy]

' Think when you were in her womb - She must have felt like a tomb - But there was always a smile
On her face no sadness traced .. '

What a wonderful flow of appreciation for the important women in one's life. If only more men did the same!

Your poem has some beautiful phrasing . Not sure but i think English is a second language so, many congratulations for doing so well with it.

[Ashwin Thakur]

Thank you for reading it and you are right english is my aecond language

[Ashwin Thakur]

Thank you for reading it and you are right english is my aecond language

[Ashwin Thakur]

A mistake its second not aecond:)

[emmajoy]

no matter.. :)