A Poem by Ashwin Thakur


If you belive in god
Why you make excuse?
Believe in a miracle
And sit there amused
Wasting time
To select and choose
It will not make
Your long noose loose
Get adressed by others
By a lower filthy name
And tell others smiling
You are playing a game
There are many others like you
Who do the same
Some sit in shame
And some crossroad in vain
Work a little more
That is all you need
Dig up the ground
And sow your eternal seed
And see the magic later
How thousand people it feeds.......

© 2015 Ashwin Thakur

Author's Note

Ashwin Thakur
Be happy and read it

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I love that
Faiths and beliefs are to be incorporated in daily life
That entails disconnect of society's vanity
and steering away from anyone who is egoistic

For in faith we find true understanding and ways to love the day from its own birth
to love people
our ways and the road

i love this inspirational gold

Posted 2 Years Ago

Ashwin Thakur

2 Years Ago

Thank you for reading it..
Very nice tribute to your faith and beliefs.

Posted 3 Years Ago

Ashwin Thakur

3 Years Ago

Thankyou for reading it....
To hold faith is hard. A good life tried to lead with kindness, concern and love. I liked the thoughts and you left something for the reader to think about. Should be the goal of the writer. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.

Posted 3 Years Ago

Ashwin Thakur

3 Years Ago

Thankyou for reading it
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.

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3 Reviews
Added on August 30, 2015
Last Updated on August 30, 2015
Tags: Inspirational, happy.


Ashwin Thakur
Ashwin Thakur

Mumbai, India

I am passionate for my writing as everybody here would be and i am looking forward to improve in every aspect of this beautiful art more..