Razorback

Lyric that I wrote for the song "Razorback" by my band, MegaNyra.

I can feel a change in my ideals

and I can say it feels

a lot like you are killing me.

I can't say you're like me.

You are nothing like me.

You won't get inside me.

You won't kill me.

I don't care anymore.

Its all been said before.

You hate me.

You sate me.

You'll never destroy me.

You hear me.

You fear me.

Just try to destroy me.

Berate me,

then rape me.

You'll never destroy me.

You hate me

and you sate me.

Just try to destroy me.

The tongues of man spread seeds of lies,

sewn to ferment in despise.

Festered in an open crypt

lie hearts of man that death has ripped.

The face of man remains in two.

Hypocrisy and blood runs through

these wings of razors that adorn my spine.

Remember childe, this life is mine.

Shattered glass that once was man

holds no loyalty to where it stands.

Shards of hatred, all they be.

Not a single mirror reflecting thee.

The blood of angels rains tonight.

Stab my back and fall from flight.

Leave the skies, my angel pure.

Your grave now lies upon my skewer.

Author's Note

You can hear the full track with music and lyrics at MegaNyra.com or www.myspace.com/meganyra1.

Reviews

After reading these lyrics, I'm probably going to check the music out. right after this review/comment, in fact.

Killer first stanza- simple, but effective.
actually, first time in a good long while I've seen both a damned good beginning and ending to a write.

Only negative thing I'd say is that I don't like how the first part of the lyrics are simple, then the second part is more complex and detailed. it doesn't seem to mesh quite well.
But that's my own personal preference.
maybe that's where the actual music would come in, playing a big part in the outcome.

[Sara]

I read it, looked up the song to see the flow in the music, which I can't understand a word of the music O.O, even with the lyrics but the guitar rifts kick a*s. For the poem (lyrics) I like it overall but my favorite stanzas would have to be the 1st and the last 2. The 1st stanza grabbed my attention right away and the last two not only summed up the feeling of the 1st one but feels like instead of them killing you, that you've had revenge. This is well written and I enjoy it.