This Love

He has my heart. He had it before I knew him. It was fate (:

Take some time

With your lips on mine;

Listen to hearts

Combine rhythm and rhyme.

Align the stars,

In your eyes, sublime.

Move closer;

The rate of my heart will climb.

A melody

So soft and sweet,

We’re light in our hearts

And light on our feet.

Forget the world,

For this story is ours.

Forget the preface,

Forget the scars.

Glittering lights

Hung up above,

This is all I’ve only been dreaming of.

Tomorrow I fly

With the morning dove,

For all I know now

Is we learn through love.

Author's Note

Comments would be lovely (: please and thanks!

Reviews

[Bare trees]

This is such a nice dedication to someone you love told from a caring and hopeful heart. You've written a good poem here Ashlee. Nice work.

[Seshat Nidaba]

When you read a poem that uses cliche elements but doesn't sound cliche, you know it's something special! Fabulous ending, wonderful flow.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the beautiful and positive poem. The statement were hopeful and allow the reader to feel the contentment for the gift of love.
"Tomorrow I fly
With the morning dove,
For all I know now
Is we learn through love. "
Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[leinahtan]

your poems are even more musical than mine.
and i just couldn't help but marvel on these lines:

"Forget the world,
For this story is ours.
Forget the preface,
Forget the scars."

brilliant. genius. :)