This Is All

When you feel as if all your bad emotions are all that's left...

Here I am again.
feeling as if I'm my only friend.
I hate to feel this way,
I hate to feel this pain.


This is all that's inside of me.
This is all I'll ever be.

Here I am again, alone and afraid.
Feeling as if, there's no more to say.
I hate to feel alone.
I hate to feel ashamed.

This is all that's inside of me.

This is all I'll ever be.

　

©2-21-2015 by Ashley Nicole Nordyke

Reviews

[Tinotenda Nyevedzanai]

beautifully written, short and simple with a deep meaning that's not too emotional to read.

[closed]

very emotive ashley

you seem to write alot on severed friendships, loss and love
thier ups and downs

i hope you find true happiness soon

-Dream

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thanks so much. I do write a lot about that, as that has been major theme in my life.

[Nini]

Nice job. I agree with previous reviews...these are dark, but I like them. I write dark at times too. I can relate to a lot of your writing. You are very gifted.

[AaronFreitas]

You already know I am your friend so you should never feel like you are your only friend :) I got your back girlie!!! Awesome work

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thanks Aaron! I've got your back, too!

[Tks]

Ashley, I agree with Cool Girl..your recent poems have meandered towards the darker side. I feel this is also another place where your writing has really shone through..and your words have more depth and complexity as a result. Well done!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thank you!

[Cool Girl]

Your recent poems are dark lol
I really like it though!
You have so much variety as a writer which is a great thing!
Amazing job, sis! You're spectacular :)

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thanks sis..
I've just had this very gothic feel lately!
I can't explain it..

[Cool Girl]

That's interesting..
You're welcome!!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

I know, right?
It's a strange feeling..

[Cool Girl]

Yeah, I've felt like that before..
It's odd..

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Yes. It is..

[Lizardo]

"This is all that's inside of me.
This is all I'll ever be."
Those lines show sadness all over the place, but this poem is really good, you express your feelings in a good way, I think this poems sends a beat.
It's really good!

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thank you Lizardo!

[Lizardo]

You're welcome!

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Such a sense of emptiness and sadness in this piece. I'm sure we've all felt like this at one time or another. Good write Ashley.

[♥ Ari Skye ♥]

Thank you darling!