Static in My Head

Static in My Head

A Poem by ♥ Ari Skye ♥
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This is for my Best Friend, Izzy. Who I've been missing lately...

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All alone, with the static in my head.

My empty heart, fills with dread.

I have to be frank, I miss my best friend.

 

All alone, I cry dark tears.

Cradling my bruised heart.

I know I shouldn’t take it personally,

But the silence is deafening.

 

In the dark, I sit alone.

Think of memories, still unknown.

I miss your voice, on the telephone.

I can not stand, being alone.

 

All alone, radio silence in my head.

My empty heart feels dead.

I have to be frank, I miss my best friend.

 

©3-27-2015 by Ashley Nicole Nordyke

© 2015 ♥ Ari Skye ♥


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Sometimes we value something when they are gone.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Again, Wow! This one hit home hard tonight. I miss my best friend too. A good writer invokes emotion in their reader...just like you did now. Good job.

Posted 9 Years Ago


♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

Thank you Nini! I'm glad you enjoyed!
Nini

8 Years Ago

I would really like to share some of your poems on my facebook wall this month, since April is poetr.. read more
♥ Ari Skye ♥

8 Years Ago

Please do. It would be an honor! In fact, you could also add me if you want. http://www.facebook.com.. read more
I have a best friend, but she put all kind of stuff in my mind that made me think that she liked me...The surprise was she toll me that she had a boyfriend, I miss my best friend who wasn't like that, she was different.. I would give everything for those times to return again.
Great write ashley, we can all relate to this one as well.

Posted 9 Years Ago


♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

Thanks Lizardo. Yeah sometimes people don't realize that their actions affect our emotions... Or the.. read more
nice poem...the rhyming is great and the words are emotionally intense

Posted 9 Years Ago


♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Ashley: It is lovely!! The flow is wonderful; it continually builds to a higher level each line....I enjoyed it all, every single word. BFF's are forever....great work; raw, honest. Thank you so very much!

All alone, I cry dark tears.
Cradling my bruised heart.
I know I shouldn’t take it personally,
But the silence is deafening.

Simply beautiful.....Dale

Posted 9 Years Ago


Confuser

9 Years Ago

You're right Ashley, and it certainly showed...You're welcome too!...dale
Confuser

9 Years Ago

........................................Sorry????........................................Bye, take c.. read more
♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

Ok? It was fine what you said. I just now saw your comment.. Lol.
Ashley that was very well written.. I know that you miss Izzy... He will talk to you soon.. He is probably having one of his moments...ok.. He will talk when he gets lonely & needs a really good friend.. I LOVE YOU & keep up the hard work my love!!! ♥

Posted 9 Years Ago


Tessa Danielle Guise

9 Years Ago

Yep.. Now do what i say...lol... Go try to talk to Izz bird..lol
♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

I have been. We've been texting each other!
Tessa Danielle Guise

9 Years Ago

ok...just figured that out a fewm mins ago when i had to pee!!lol
Excellent poem. It really tugged at my emotions a bit because I too recently lost a close friend and I'm feeling some of these things too. The rhyming was great too, I can never get a poem to rhyme, I can only do that with songs when I write them lol. Very good work. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

Thank you Aaron. It comes easy some nights, others not so much.
some silences have a reason... and some are an excuse. Who did the letting go?

Posted 9 Years Ago


♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

Nobody let go. My friend and I, who talk everyday, haven't talked in a few days. & I just wanted to .. read more
Chris

9 Years Ago

good...so CALL him then - chuckling here and stop just thinking about the missing!
♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

Haha. I plan on it. I texted him last night, he answered once, & then it was silence again.. I also .. read more
A wonderful write describing how much you miss your friend. Good job Ashley!

Posted 9 Years Ago


♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

Thank you, FT.
I read this and could only think... you never miss me!! haha jk my friend... awesome piece :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


♥ Ari Skye ♥

9 Years Ago

Well I miss you, too!! It's been weighing on my heart tonight & I just had to write it..

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Hi there! I'm Ari! ♥ A member of NSCS (National Society of Collegiate Scholars) and Alpha Sigma Pi. I graduated with a BA in English in 2019. Studied Psychology at UoPX, and am currently a Ma.. more..

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