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I Almost

I Almost

A Poem by Ashley Ree
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Lesson Learned.

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I almost,

told you I loved you.

I fell for you the second you spoke to me.

Didn’t I tell you? 

Didn’t I tell you that you were my first?

My everything? 

And my all?


I did,

give you everything. 

Every part of me. 

My Body. 

My Mind.

My Soul. 

And My Heart. 


I don’t regret,

losing it to you.

I regret that I fell for you. 

I regret not kissing you.

I regret my trust in you.  

I regret many things, 

But not you as a whole. 


I believe, 

everything happens for a reason. 

You, 

And I. 

We happened for a reason.

A heart broken, 

A lesson learned. 


I almost, 

told you I loved you. 

That was a mistake. 

You were full of lust. 

I, on the other hand, 

Wouldn’t say no.

Because, well;

I loved you. 

© 2010 Ashley Ree


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this is soooooooooo GOOD!! like really beautiful!

Posted 12 Years Ago


Pros: This poem tells a story, and I love that. And the story itself is something I relate to, to a certain degree. It's beautifully written and laid out in a very different, yet interesting way. Normally, I wouldn't like the longer lines being surrounded by mildly shorter ones (due to flow reasons and whatnot), but this poem flows so well, that isn't a problem at all.

Cons: Nothing whatsoever.

Overall: I love this poem, I really, truly do.

Posted 13 Years Ago


I could really feel your feelings in this one. You write about emotion so well. Great poem keep up the good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful. In your poems you manage to express strong feelings and thoughts with simple words. And I like the shape of this one.

Posted 13 Years Ago


The truth of it shocks me.
A possible adolescent feeling the tantrums of first love, the scare of it all.
It's great :)
Keep it up Ashley Ree

Posted 13 Years Ago


We can trip over love when lust takes over. I like the poem. The emotion of love allow us to open door close to but a few in a life. I like the reason for the poem. To hold back words to protect yourself. A excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 13 Years Ago


I love how most of your pieces relate to a stage in your life. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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