A Moment before Time

A Moment before Time

A Poem by The AshKat Projects
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...that rapid and yet neverending moment before I see you...

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So funny a thing really
How fast a heart might beat
A throat that is now closing
The anxiety I feel

Fingers slightly trembling
A breath out of control
An effort made to swallow
But my neck is now a knot

My stomach aches
A whirling daze
A slight wave of heat
My mind races bedazzled
So frustrated yet sweet

My chest is pounding
Hard as ever
And my voice now breaks and cracks
My eyes glitter and see a wonder
If only dreams were facts

I long to see
And hear and feel
The aura of your breeze
To touch and kiss
Your warm sweet cheeks
So tender be your kiss

And if perhaps by any chance
Our lips came up to meet
My heart would melt and knees would bend
For that kiss would be my wish

© 2017 The AshKat Projects


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Wow, this is your finest poem I've yet seen. The lyrical quality combined with the rhyming scheme is excellently done and well-crafted. I'm guessing most people could relate to this piece in one way or another.

Keep it up!

Posted 7 Years Ago


The AshKat Projects

7 Years Ago

Why, thank you! (said with a smile to the ears blushing) ;)
Ohhh Somethog Something Feelings Of Kiss After Reading This Nice Poem

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful! Loved the ending! The whole poem led up to the kiss so well, I was left with a smile on my face. Tyfs!

Posted 7 Years Ago


The AshKat Projects

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much!! I'm really glad you liked it! :)

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Tags: heart, anxiety, feel, tremble, out of control, knot, daze, frustrated, sweet, longing, kiss, melt, wish

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The AshKat Projects
The AshKat Projects

Athens, Paleon Faliro, Greece



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