The Wind

Its fast its slow
its cold its warm
sometimes it blows me down
it spreads fire
burns down trees
soft summer breeze 
may become
brutal

Reviews

[Pencrafter]

Interesting description of wind. You might try adding some lines about the good things brought by wind, such as fresh air, the smell of salty ocean, pushes your kite along--that sort of thing. It's a good poem because it's easy to read and understand, in my opinion. Keep writing!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Ashton it is one of your best so far. Describes wind so well.
You sure are coming along with your writing sweetie.
xo

[hmm]

this is wonderful, I enjoyed this one.

[jennifer little]

wonderful poetry i loved reading it thanks for sharing this with me