The Wind

The Wind

A Poem by Ashton Blake

Its fast its slow
its cold its warm
sometimes it blows me down
it spreads fire
burns down trees
soft summer breeze 

may become

© 2012 Ashton Blake

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Interesting description of wind. You might try adding some lines about the good things brought by wind, such as fresh air, the smell of salty ocean, pushes your kite along--that sort of thing. It's a good poem because it's easy to read and understand, in my opinion. Keep writing!

Posted 5 Years Ago

Ashton it is one of your best so far. Describes wind so well.
You sure are coming along with your writing sweetie.

Posted 6 Years Ago

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this is wonderful, I enjoyed this one.

Posted 6 Years Ago

wonderful poetry i loved reading it thanks for sharing this with me

Posted 6 Years Ago

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Added on March 18, 2012
Last Updated on March 18, 2012


Ashton Blake
Ashton Blake

Redfeild, AR

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