this is the day

this is the day

A Poem by Asiatic Fox
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11/30/07

"
this is the day
with crimson scarlet crushed flowers
growing out of righteous lips

this is the day
when sunsets bloom
and people rise up renewed from
the tombs

this is the day
of rejoicing, when dancing has a call
across the world

this is the day
when song rises up like incense
and we pray thanks for
freedom and drink
righteous wine

© 2009 Asiatic Fox


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As Veronica said. This gets across great imagery.
All in all, it was a really well written poem.

Thank you for sharing.

XxStaySweet,
Rina

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is really well written. It has great imagery.
Thankyou for sharing.

xx
Veronica

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Asiatic Fox
Asiatic Fox

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My first book of poetry is published! 'Interstellar Love' by Corey King (ugh, my real name >=o): http://www.blurb.com/bookstore/detail/823666 more..

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A Poem by Asiatic Fox