Destruction Of Our Connection.

Numbing grip of mistrust takes hold.

Jealous waves rage for control.

Lost is the shared love once in the air.

Obstacles we can’t get over cause tear.

 

Roughage to my heart- unsettling.

Trying to make peace; but can’t let go.

When your love hurts you, it’s permanent.

Impossible it seems, to try and forget.

 

Left are the harsh words you said;

Wouldn’t it be better, if we both cared?

Crumbling edges of our connection, lost.

Destructive actions; we must pay the cost.

 

Resurrected is the uncertainty I had.

In you, I have abandoned all hope of future.

It was your choice; unfortunate for you.

It should have never existed, I was choice two.

 

Our wreckage now lies in an unburied grave.

Somewhere no one can see, or even find.

These two destinies- not meant to be.

Crossed in a moment but needed to be freed.

 

Connective love that will never really fade.

Even though the betrayal left it stained.

Washed away is out forgotten potential.

Sleep now; forget all of the trouble.

Author's Note

Kind of really personal, so yeah.

Reviews

[Vanessa Rico]

So sad and heartbreaking, but powerful. This deserves a 100!

[Karina Anderson]

I actually really like that idea lines, Raymond. Thank you.

[Raymond]

Very nice Karina, nice (however sad) imagery. from a critique standpoint...how would you feel about unmarked grave instead of unburied?

[A.E. Surdam]

Wow, it was so beautiful and touched my heart as I read. I just adored the imagery and how you wove together the poem itself to create it as you did.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A host of imagery, sadness and prayer. We as a race strife for secrecy and beneficent but never reach it, your words tackle some of the most intricateness workings of the human mind, well done, a great read.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

stunning honesty and beautiful imagery! love it!