The Drunk Alien

My first piece of writing

The alien gurgled and burgled as he clutched the cold, slippery and dense wine bottle. He shoved the whole thing down his tight and lumpy throat. He ferociously wept as he let out a roar! Seeing illusions, which were crazy as hell, of clowns, pink busses and full to the brim wells! He shook his head with fear and collapsed on the floor as he let out the last of his mighty roar...

Author's Note

This is my first piece of work and i did it without planning.

Reviews

[alice mercury]

I like the concept and the idea behind it--though, it seems a bit short, and a bit random. I'd love to see more, with maybe more character development or plot!