At the Edge of Tomorrow

Chromatic summer daisies stretch toward the paling tangerine sun
Their tilted stems sway away from phantom shadows
Whilst spectres dance in the ever-increasing beclouded twilight
Luminescence hovers betwixt misty petals
Blossoms grasp for final moments of radiance
Trying desperately to create a vestige of day to get through the night

Reviews

[poet2angels (lynda)]

Beautiful imagery, well chosen language and such emotion!
Excellent piece!
TY for entering!

Lynda

[Jerbear The Great]

wow. this is a very compelling poem. a lot of big words thrown in with a twist. hard to understand, but an overall masterpiece. Good Job.

[Shapeshifter]

Sounds to me as if the flower is all of us at one point, trying to just make it through the night in being so strong yet completely crumbling. Great visuals! B

[Silver_Moon]

very visual... good words... like this poem. :)
I can feel the warmth of the sun and the cool breeze. hehehe!!

Keep up the good work! :D

[Wildfleour]

Interesting perspective on determination.