A Blue Print

The life of a modern woman is like a blueprint

Small frame
soft name,
tiny breasts,
dark skin.
Long hair,
flows back,
touching the flesh,
gently on her
lower back.
Dark eyes,
prefect smile,
woven into a
pretty face.
A blueprint of beauty,
right before our eyes,
catch it quickly,
before it dies.

Reviews

[therisa]

A soft flowing poem, about a subject that is eternal, never growing old, no matter, how old we grow, ourselves. Like any blueprint, one can build upon it, making minor changes, to match our definition of beauty. I feel like you are looking back at a former lover, taken too soon from you. It has that feeling of sadness, which heights the emotions, the reader has. Thank you, for sharing this poem with us.

[Butch Decatoria]

Wow, powerful in its simplicity and full of imagery...

[Fuzzy_Poluzah]

Nicely done. I don't even know how to describe this. Exquisite.

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beauty is in the eye of the beholder..

[morningstar]

nice flow you have here! simple short and discriptive. i love poems like these. You're a talented writer :)

[Alex Zynder]

I like the title and the metaphor, relates well in the poem. sharp and well written.

[The Cougar's Den]

This reads quickly, and beautifully - thanks for writing it!

[cfix]

This is a fun write, so poetic as well.
I liked this write. Very nicely written!