Greed

Greed

A Story by grayscale

The lions hoards 
the lakes and fords,
lets the lambs thirst to death
and shepherds blind
to all their kind
to let the lions play
upon their sleep 
they often weep
and wish they all hath died 

© 2016 grayscale



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A Nice story in your style! The greed with cruelty when prevails causing loss to others makes it unjust to accept.
Thanks for sharing.keep writing...

Posted 2 Years Ago


Very well thought out and written. Even though I couldn't quite understand the message, I assume it has to do with the lions' greed, or simply greed in general. I love how you used animals as the main focus in this poem, making me think about things like dominance. Great job!

Posted 2 Years Ago



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 grayscale
grayscale

Chillicothe, OH



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Finally back for a bit, I guess Feel free to contact me or message me , I typically respond within an hour. II more..

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