colourz

colourz

A Poem by grayscale
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I did write it oddly on purpose.

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Your eyes were green,
a modest hue,
the ocean blue 
grew of my heart,
never did the white carnation
give i did
fade and wither
but beauty of colours 
always shiver
for the past gave me faded memories 
but the colours never did.

© 2017 grayscale


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I really like this! Something I always appreciate about poetry is you have so much freedom with your word choice! It's not like writing an essay where you use what best fits your vocabulary and subject. Rather, it's choosing the words that reflect you. I love the words you chose.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 grayscale

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I also highly agree, I was self taught in poetry rules , so I formed my own , I never lis.. read more



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I like the way you have used metaphors for colours. I loved the last line well written. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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hope youre not dead, see you soon.


Posted 7 Years Ago


 grayscale

7 Years Ago

Not dead , at Bluffton, in classes , you okay ?
I know a thing or two about poems and this sure is one. 👍

Posted 7 Years Ago


I really like this! Something I always appreciate about poetry is you have so much freedom with your word choice! It's not like writing an essay where you use what best fits your vocabulary and subject. Rather, it's choosing the words that reflect you. I love the words you chose.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

 grayscale

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I also highly agree, I was self taught in poetry rules , so I formed my own , I never lis.. read more

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Added on January 20, 2017
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 grayscale
grayscale

Chillicothe, OH



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A Poem by grayscale