Wavelenght

You thanked me
for
everything
and I couldn't be
certain of your
sincerity
because saying
thank you for all
means
existing on the
forms you created
in those eruptions of
honesty that
secured my body
it means the structure
of day is woven
with echoes
of you saying my
name
because hearing
how you loved it
made me love it too
it means living
out your days
knowing
you were given
these months
of insight into
someone so unique
yet so fitting
it means the
denseness of self
caused by your
integration
into the very
meaning of
who I am
so
thank you
for
everything

Reviews

[bobc]

A...I'm enjoying how you write and how you structure poems on the page. This voice has a way of speaking here that I find accessible and poetic...a fine combination. One small thing...check spelling...bobc

[KurKota]

Absorbtion is the meaning that comes to me as I read this.....the absorbing of each into the other by familiarity and emotionality. Very philosophical.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Again... the theme resonates with your work... the flow and detail comes out the same... I know that it's you writing the verse... you end this relatively:

into the very
meaning of
who I am
so
thank you
for
everything