Come, the Dawn

Come, the dawn. 
Sprinkle the horizon with 
bronze, gold and crimson.

Come, the wind. 
Make her dance with
leaves and branches.

Come, the rain. 
Wake her with a gentle
splatter on her window.

Come, the dusk.
Dapple the dark night 
with shimmering stars.

Reviews

[keith]

the carry over of 'come' is most effective.
a good write this is.
well done