By the Sea

Author's Note

By the ivory sea
I walk with my Beloved
contemplating gold capped waves
reflecting the divinity
shining from her eyes

Reviews

[SHEEMA HUQ]

a nice glimpse of joys of life by the sea

[JulieÉmile]

Very nice and vivid. But you could have added two or three more stanzas. It seems incomplete this way. Still, it was a pleasure to read!

[Mother Maggie]

In its shortness, it may leave you wanting more--but the magic is in that on poignant moment--it is a snapshot of the transitory experience of walking with the Beloved on the crest of a ridge beside a sea of fog surrounded by sacred silence. I am glad you enjoyed it and thank you for your insight

Namaste