The Wedding Bell

The Wedding Bell

A Poem by Avanthika
"

A daughter is always the small child of her father. When she gets married.....we know the pain of getting apart from our family.

"

The Wedding Bell


Tring,tring, the wedding bell rings

Outside the window the lovely bird sings

Such a lovely day the morning brings

getting attached to the new string.

 

I open my eyes, look at the date,

Oh my God,its gonna be late.

Quick for a bath, take another hour,

Another one hour, that’s a lengthy shower.

 

I must look, the prettiest among pretty,

In the centre of crowd, I would be kitty.

With beauty at its best,

I come out of the nest.

 

It’s my wedding day,

From all that way,

Towards a new home, for a new life.

I’ll be transformed from daughter to wife.

 

In the thick of crowd my head bend,

upon the locket he ties the thread.

Some time with dad, can I spend?

There’s no excuse he’s my only friend.


Time to depart

Feeling stuck inside heart.

When others smiled I cried,

The reason I give, because am bride.

 

My eyes search for my father,

But no one seems a bit to bother.

I search, I hunt then I cry,

like I was giving my last try.

 

I feel so sad,

I don’t see dad,

I sense loneliness,

My father’s my weakness.

 

Tring tring, the alarm bell rings,

Outside the window, the bird still sings.

 The happiest day, my husband brings.

I see my father, that’s a big thing.

 


© 2014 Avanthika



Author's Note

Avanthika
so how did the wedding went ?

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Avantika you just got me this is really not quite a new matter but the way you penned it made tear a little. I really fearing to face this I don't know will I gather the strenth or not but fearing a lot. Nicely written and heart touching being more attached to parents and specially dad ( till today we fight like kids for simple matters ) separating from them is really very hard.

Posted 2 Years Ago


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Interesting and an emotional read Avantika! I can feel what you meant, reminded me of a friend's wedding and this aptly described what she went through..

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avantika you just got me this is really not quite a new matter but the way you penned it made tear a little. I really fearing to face this I don't know will I gather the strenth or not but fearing a lot. Nicely written and heart touching being more attached to parents and specially dad ( till today we fight like kids for simple matters ) separating from them is really very hard.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This one was a little harder to read as there was words missing in some places and I had to assume what they were. It is a nice wedding poem I enjoyed it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avanthika

2 Years Ago

you can suggest me ways to improve my writing, am always ready to follow.
Good poem! The rhyming was very good :D

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avanthika

2 Years Ago

thank you so much sir, your review means a lot to me :) thank you so much for reading.
wow. amazing poem. rythming is also good.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avanthika

2 Years Ago

thank you dear :)
a heart touching poem....salute for the writing my friend :)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avanthika

2 Years Ago

thank you Anshul:)
This is way too good as far as the feelings go...a subtle expression of a situation that makes a wife out of a daughter...

Pleasure reading

Posted 3 Years Ago


Avanthika

3 Years Ago

thank you so much frnd :)
such an honest writing , emotions are really coming out effortlessly ,the ending was really touching , the wedding went really well :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Avanthika

3 Years Ago

thank you so much Amrit , really happy to see your review :)
the concept is gud n i like it..gud work

Posted 3 Years Ago


Avanthika

3 Years Ago

thanks a lot frnd :)

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