The Violin

The Violin

A Poem by Avatarfanx2
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A haiku about the violin that I wrote a few years ago. :P

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Singing with no words

While opening our hard hearts

It closes our eyes


© 2010 Avatarfanx2



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It sucks I know. :P Reviews are appreciated! :P

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...while opening our hard hearts...
That's a pretty powerful line. Your poem reminds me of the quote: "Where words fail, music speaks."
It's not bad at all, maybe you should graduate from haiku writing and try your hand at actual poetry? I'd really enjoy reading that.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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I believe I best appreciate music when closing my eyes and ignoring all other distractions. Great job capturing that!

Posted 2 Years Ago


...while opening our hard hearts...
That's a pretty powerful line. Your poem reminds me of the quote: "Where words fail, music speaks."
It's not bad at all, maybe you should graduate from haiku writing and try your hand at actual poetry? I'd really enjoy reading that.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

omg haikus! no way, i liked it! the violin is truly a magnificent instrument, and your description of it was flawless!

Posted 7 Years Ago



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Added on January 11, 2010
Last Updated on January 11, 2010
Tags: Violin, Haiku

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Monroeville, PA



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