Milk 'Staches

Milk 'Staches

Have you ever had 

A Milk Mustache?

There was once a fad 

Everyone would dash

To get a milk mustache.

Small ones and long

Vanilla, choc and strawberry mash

Let's sing a song 

As everyone makes a dash

To get a milk 'stache.

Splash some milk on your face

And bat your lashes

Take part in the milk race

Where everyone dashes 

To get the best milk mustaches!

Reviews

[Aditi]

Beautiful piece of writing Siya. It's since generations from us to yours we all have loved to have the milk mustache and play with it.
Keep up your excellent work.

[AwesomeSiya]

Thank u, Aditi!! ;)

[BThomvanWart]

This was such a nice reminder of youth and innocence. My only critique is that the flow of the piece slows down at the line "Take part in your the milk race," which is an easy fix. Otherwise, a very nice, nostalgic piece. Good work! ^_^

[AwesomeSiya]

Thanks for your wonderful review!! This was the first review for my first blog!! It's highly encouraging!! :)