Body Goddess

Men rule with strength and power; women rule with tender and pleasure.

Elegant shapes in ribbons

Entanglements of enchantment

Abound with beauty,

Her face is a morning sun

Lifting the veil of darkness, beauty eyes are blind

Nothing in the world is as dreamy

 

Her neck with scenic design

Holding the mysteries embedded in her mind

Shoulders that bare the roof

Of her bosom,

That she confess her deep enriched desires

Enrapturing with her cleavage

With sinful thoughts as one looks

 

Beguiled in your heart like Adam to her fruit

Curvy as her hips,

Dancing with her belly that holds

Like her hands moist of heaven’s touch

Whisked in coldly shivers,

 

She lays her feet resting all emotions in you

Her snare deepens

As the dreams you hold of her vision

In the midst of her treasure, the centre of Eden

Where she rest her body goddess.

Reviews

[Divinity Sleeps in This]

This was by far one of my favorite poems of the last tournament and I was tempted to rank it higher, since it has such a tribal eloquence and I'm partial to the Goddess. However somewhere along the repeated biblical references I got cold feet.

Though the trance you create is unmistakable and very fine.