The Days I've Lost
A Poem by Scott
I regret these days I lost,
One big past, Futurs most,
The rise of death, Begining left,
Brought upon me, The despise and depth,
You failed to support my body,
you've let me fall and how?
Theres no hope, so please dont try,
You cant save me now.
© 2008 Scott
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i feel the same kind of regret in so many ways to
nice poem =)
i can definatly relate
Posted 1 Year Ago
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I've felt regret like that. Thanks for sharing.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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This is really nice.
Posted 2 Years Ago
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Nothing's never too late as long as you're alive.
Remember that.
THough I'm sorry you're regretting something.
But, like Emerson always says, the past is behind you so you must just keep facing forward.
Or something like that anyhow.
God bless!
~RD
Posted 2 Years Ago
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deep, the only thing is, like i say, u regret nothing u do, so maybe take that out of there. break up poem im guessing? says a lot about the person who it is about, she sounds disappointing, upsetting, but it sounds like u love her...never loose faith
Posted 2 Years Ago
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Added on June 21, 2008
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ScottStaten Island, NY
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I am a song writer and a poet. I play Guitar, Piano, Bass, Trumpet, Drums and I Sing. I LOVE romance, As i am romantic. My songs are usually about love, etc. Well, im gunna go, Muah!
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